ryan's memo :: Writing exercise 08/11

2008/08/11 16:32 망할영어

Writing exercise 08/11

영어학원 숙제인데, 복습겸 올려둡니다. 학원에서 교정 받기 전이구요. 레슨 후에 교정본도 올려두도록 하겠습니다.
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교정 받은 부분은 붉은 색으로 표시해뒀습니다. 주로 지적 받은 부분은 세가지네요.

Prepositions : in, on
Articles : a / the
Countable/Uncountable noun

1. You're attending a meeting in another country for a week. Leave a junior colleague instructions about how to complete a small project that is in progress at the moment.

Hi Jack,

As you know I will be out of office ~~for~~ next week to attend a meeting with K company. For next week you should handle the project T instead of me.

Currently the project is on in the preperation stage. The request of K company to build the system was sent to our engineering team. Our enineering team might give you the answer and the prerequisites for hardwares. The answer and prerequisites have to be ~~easy to understand to~~ simple for K company. You should review and confirm that carefully at the point. If the documents are too ~~much~~ technical to understand, you should inform our team what ~~will be~~ needs to be modified. If there is no problem, you should translate it in Korean and send it to K company. Is that clear?

Thanks,
Ryan

2. A friend is going to be staying in your house for a few days, but you'll be at work. Leave instructions for them so that they can work the CD player, TV, DVD / video, or a home computer to check email.

Hi Tom,

I was so happy when I ~~know~~ knew that you will stay in/at my home. Unfortunately I can't spend much time with you. I should work at my office during your stay. I wrote some guideslines for you. It will be helpful to ~~handle~~ operate my stuffs.

1. The CD player is placed in on the book stand at in my room. The interface is quite easy to use. Just press big button in front of pannel when you want to play a CD. Press it again it when you wants to stop ~~to play~~ the music.

2. The TV and DVD are placed at in the living room. You should use integrated remote controller to operate these. The controller might be looked complicated. Don't worry about that. You don't need to know all the buttons ~~on that~~. You just need to push the red power button to turn on the TV and DVD, then push some narrows to play and stop the DVD.

I hope you will be comfortable at my home.

See you soon,
Ryan

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